1-3 Caroline
Good, fluent, perhaps too fast - comes in bursts. Try to speak more smoothly.
BraZIL
the first economic plan > one of the world's top economies
a chance to success > a chance to succeed OR a chance for success
4 Cécile
Somewhat hesitant, not good when you read slides
Chicago > first sound sh like ship
public > u like duck
insecurity > security problems
determinated > determined
to explain you > to explain to you
9 Safa
Don't read! Quite a few grammatical errors
very beautifuls landscape > very beautiful landscapes
one of the world most renowned cities in the world > one of the world's most renowned cities
endless > e like bed
so why they will organise this event > why will they organise this event
25 millions dollars > 25 million_ dollars
it's a big montant > it's a large sum
where it will be organised the FIFA world cup > where the FIFA world cup will be organised
11 Agnès
You sound as though you are reading - try not to, because it's hard to understand.
drawback
lives > i like
construction
law > o like call
12 Nicolas
Good delivery - good volume, speed. Many grammatical errors, and watch your 'th'
China > i like I, eye
August > o like call
economical problems
three importants elements
th: we can see that (not thee that)
Presentation Corrections
Slide 2: Presentation
Threats to Brazil
Chances of Success
Slide 3: 31stOlympic Games was chosen
Copenhagen
Slide 7: opening and closing ceremonies
Slide 11: threats to Brazil need to construct roads...
authorities
$10 billion
Slide 12: chances for success the greatest opening
no place
Slide 13: chances for success
we had 3 important events
Oral comments
1-3 Caroline
Good, fluent, perhaps too fast - comes in bursts. Try to speak more smoothly.
BraZIL
the first economic plan > one of the world's top economies
a chance to success > a chance to succeed OR a chance for success
4 Cécile
Somewhat hesitant, not good when you read slides
Chicago > first sound sh like ship
public > u like duck
insecurity > security problems
determinated > determined
to explain you > to explain to you
9 Safa
Don't read! Quite a few grammatical errors
very beautifuls landscape > very beautiful landscapes
one of the world most renowned cities in the world > one of the world's most renowned cities
endless > e like bed
so why they will organise this event > why will they organise this event
25 millions dollars > 25 million_ dollars
it's a big montant > it's a large sum
where it will be organised the FIFA world cup > where the FIFA world cup will be organised
11 Agnès
You sound as though you are reading - try not to, because it's hard to understand.
drawback
lives > i like
construction
law > o like call
12 Nicolas
Good delivery - good volume, speed. Many grammatical errors, and watch your 'th'
China > i like I, eye
August > o like call
economical problems
three importants elements
th: we can see that (not thee that)
Presentation Corrections
Slide 2: Presentation
Threats to Brazil
Chances of Success
Slide 3: 31st Olympic Games
was chosen
Copenhagen
Slide 7: opening and closing ceremonies
Slide 11: threats to Brazil
need to construct roads...
authorities
$10 billion
Slide 12: chances for success
the greatest opening
no place
Slide 13: chances for success
we had 3 important events